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Thursday, January 15, 2009

Sundown


Post ko lang po ang isang 'cute story' na ginawa ko a year ago. Na-inspire lang kasi ako sa movie na 'Twilight'. Pero hindi ko po yan ginaya...

If anyone who watches the sundown right at this moment, he might wonder why is it so good to watch it until it fades. The feeling is glorious because it fades out along our pains. Though, it is really hard to tell the reason why.

I am a vampire. And every vampire loves the Sundown. It marks the beginning of our feast. The sundown is the helm for everything for us.

I have a girlfriend and she is a vampire, too. Everytime the sun sets, we watch it together. We hold each other's hands , then a smile will break up the sacred moment after it fades out. We watch the sundown everyday. It is our favorite part in a day.

One time, i came to a long sleep and was woke up by my friend that my girlfriend was shot by a bullet after an attempt to suck human blood. Tears began to fall arom my eyes as i watch her trying to catch on her breath.

I asked her if she wants to watch the sundown with me. She asked if the sundown is yet to come. I looked around and everything are turning into orange. Then i told her that the sun is setting.

Then we went ot our favorite place where we always watch the sundown. "It is beautiful, " she said. But it came to our surprise that our skin feels the heat. It was very hot...

I looked at her. Her eyes were closed and i could no longer hear her heartbeats. She's dead. The sundown is beautiful and glorious but it was not sundown. It was SUNRISE...

Moral Lesson:

"Not all oranges are sunset or sunrise, thay can be sweet and sour,..
or sometimes bitter..."

3 comments:

hillsky said...

kw ba talaga gumawa nito?! hay, ang cute naman!!!

pau said...

twilight ba yan??!

Anonymous said...

the story is good but there are several typos and grammatical errors. nice one though :-)
-anjie